wingch
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Post by wingch on Sept 8, 2010 7:33:26 GMT -5
I wasn't sure where to put this, but I've noticed a lot in my novel I've written some other parts that are too short to be an excerpt, and besides, you can only have one excerpt. So here, post your favorite parts, sentences, paragraphs, whatever.
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wingch
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Post by wingch on Sept 8, 2010 7:35:20 GMT -5
My personal favorite parts: We felt the bump. Hard. I remember I was thinking what else could go wrong on the trip. The radio then went out into static, and the driver started cursing. I remember thinking "OK God, you've made your point."
"We were all out of Raisin Bran, and we only had Alpha-bits. So I poured the cereal into the bowl, then filling it with extra milk. I was almost finished with my cereal, when all the letters moved themselves into a message." "Let me guess - N-O-T F-I-T F-O-R H-U-M-A-N C-O-M-S-U-M-P-T-I-O-N" Nico said
"You like to read?" Nico said to me. "Of course," I said back. "Who doesn't love reading?" "About three fourths of America." "What about the other fourth?" "They read Twilight."
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